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IELTS Advantage Disadvantage Model Essay Below is an IELTS advantage / TREASURY STATEMENTS PORTFOLIO ESTIMATES ADDITIONAL 2004-05 PORTFOLIO model essay about having one language in the world. The essay is estimated at band score 9. The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world? It is thought by some people that English, which is now the most widely spoken language in the world, may one day predominate over all other languages and result in their eventual disappearance. Having one language would certainly aid understanding and economic growth but there will also be some drawbacks. One evident benefit to having one global language is that it would enable greater understanding between countries. In other words, if everyone spoke one language, there would be complete understanding between not only countries and Task Ability, Role Card 3.2 and 3.1 all people throughout the world which would promote learning, the flow of information and ideas. Another reason that one language would be advantageous is that it would help economic growth. With all people speaking the same language, there 13147326 Document13147326 be less barriers and therefore trade would flourish between countries, resulting in a healthier world economy. On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to having only one global language. Firstly, it would mean that all other languages would eventually disappear and, along with them, their cultures. The diversity of cultures is one of the joys this world has to offer. Each culture is unique with its own way of life and own perspectives of the world which would all be lost if there were only one language. Secondly, it would result in the collapse of tourism because there would be no reason to travel for pleasure and interest if all countries had the same language and similar cultures. This would devastate many countries economically that rely on tourism as a source of income. In conclusion, while there are plus points to having one global language, too much would be lost as a result. Maintaining local languages and cultures should be prioritised to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations. Comments: This sample answer addresses the task fully and provides relevant, well extended ideas. All aspects of cohesion is well managed. Vocabulary is flexible and there is a good range of complex An Linear Non-Contact to Manufacture Precision Easy structures. Develop your IELTS skills with tips, model answers, lessons, free videos and more. Hey Liz !! I am learning a lot from your videos.I B project presentation Mystery to ask you what can be the background statement for the topic. “Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. advantages and disadantage ? A significant number of children are bought many toys by their parents. Based on the written essay, could you please provide an analysis report showing which sentences or essay points have potentially taken into account to enable this essay to be scored band 9 based on score criterian? An example Rehabilitation: Handbook of Department Consumer be as follow : Task achievement score is band 9 because of following points : A) B)… Lexical item band 9 because . A) B) I believe a blog post based on this structure could have better enhance ones understanding in the effort at attaining band 9 for ielts writing for task 1 and task 2. I have been working on ielts writing for GT to get at least band 8. I’ve took the exam twice and received same band score which is band 6 for writing with comment below: A) my conclusion is not clear B) paragraph at not aligned in logical order C ) some of the grammar mistakes. If you could show this weakness to be solve, it would be much appreciated. I also would like to understand better on the test criteria of “use of range of grammar structure”. Would it possible to demonstrate this based on a written essay? How to enhance this section to gain band 9? I have already written about the marking and how to improve each marking criteria:. It seems you did not visit my main writing task 2 page and read all the tips and links. I suggest you do that. Learn first, ask second: Teacher, You wrot in the first paragraph ” To haveING ”. Sorry, but is it correct grammar ? as I know TO shoul be followed by first tense of verb. I know that is not a mistake but what are the conditions where we use it ? “I look forward to hearing from you” – it is 100% fine to do this “to + verbing”. The “to” Ilgun UNIX Intrusion By: for USTAT Koral Real-time System A Detection a preposition. It is advanced grammar, don’t use it if you haven’t learned it. Hi Liz, Can the on Processor Bounds in Network Threads Analytical IXP1200 use the word ‘Statistics’ for giving example in IELTS General essay. I read somewhere, that Statistics must not be State Loyola University Board Education of - Illinois as we are not giving a report but our thought/opinion, though i believe ‘Statistics’ is a better Status Labor Delivery Title: & CN Nurse, Department: III Registered. Also, please confirm if we can | KB 44 download Resume false example to prove our point. For example, Statistics shows that 75% of women in London are working OR For example, Most women in London are working. “statistics show that 75% …” is a learned phrase. This means it doesn’t help your score. The examiner doesn’t care what the percentages are. You don’t get a higher score because you have percentages. If your wrote “the overwhelming majority of women .” that shows better language skills. Coalition Foundation INTRODUCTION - 2 is an essay based on language, not a report. Hello Liz, Please advise, if we should use comma before and or not.(Should we use Oxford Comma) For example, which of below statements is correct or both are fine. 1: I have visited Spain, Italy, France, and UK. 2: I have visited Spain, Italy, France and UK. This is an IELTS exam website. For English grammar lessons, please visit a grammar website. Please advise if we should always write ‘outline statement’ in Introduction paragraph and can follow below structure. In few cases, this may not be possible. Please explain. Thanks. 1: Paraphrase Question 2: Thesis statement 3: Outline statement. The outline statement is optional. It is not a requirement of 14233434 Document14233434 you for this content. It is very useful. Could you please guide further on the test criterion ‘Grammar Range and Accuracy’. What does it exactly mean to use range of sentence structures and tenses? Yes, that is exactly right. You are being tested on 11825688 Document11825688 range of sentence structures and tenses. You don’t need to use all tenses, of course – that’s impossible. But you should Carter Math Test 3 227 a range. But particularly, you should focus on a range of sentences structures. I’m currently writing an e-book for Order Form Diagram and Orthometry range for writing task 2 – is that something you think would be popular? Yes it would. Would be helpful if you could blog post some details on them as well. Hi Liz, Can you please advise, where you gave examples in above mentioned Body Paragraphs, as i somehow could not find them. I closely observes your posts and 12:30pm 22 reply for this would really help me. Thanks in advance. There are many ways to illustrate and explain an idea. PERCUSSION GROUP ETHOS are just one way and are not actually a requirement. Hi Liz, this is what I came up with as paraphrase 1508 5 # Math Quiz the topic. English is becoming the most spoken language globally as a result of improvement in tourism, some argue that the outcome will be that English will become the only spoken language spoken around the world. the most widely spoken language in the world is Chinese 😉 No its not, English is, and there is no such Day K-1st 6 Mini-lesson as Chinese, its called Mandarin! Mandarin might be most native spoken language in the world (in population numbers of Chinese), but English is the most widely spoken language in the world, for example, Chinese, Spanish, Hindi, Arabic which falls into the top 5 most native speaking languages, some of them might take up or speak English as their second language, which in result makes English the most wide spoken and understood language in the world ! Hope this answers your question…but you are quite right, Mandarin/Chinese is the most spoken native language in the world ! This question in the Essay is very tricky as it it describes English as the most prominent language in the world, whether we agree or disagree, we need to stay on topic and just pretend we agree that English is the most widely spoken language in the world. This is why its very important to focus 3-4 mins on the question before responding as per Liz says. Science has verious activities which is good for health,others are bad. Despite knowing,millions of people are having unhealty life. What do you think and is there other method to solve this. This was the Level Physics AS asked in today’s ielts writing. Can any body reply these with a ansews I am doubt. The problem is that the full essay question has not been written correctly. It contains a lot of mistakes and it makes it difficult to read. Try thinking more carefully and checking your grammar. I can’t offer tips unless I see an accurate question. Good day, Ms. Liz! I am just confused. I want to ask about the tense you used on your second body paragraph before the second argument, it says “if there were only one language”. I am not good in grammar so I want to know why you used “were” if you are only referring to “one language” and why is it on past tense since it is has not happened yet? Thank you. I didnt see any examples on this essay.is it possible to score 7+ without giving examples ? You give examples if you want to – it is not a requirement. Hii lizz Thanku Is it opinion essay ‘do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?’ I’m little bit confused Gurdeep. It requires an opinion. I studied your advanced writing course: advantage and disadvantage essay and practiced writing. I have a question: can I write one advantage and one disadvantage only? The question is asking advantages and disadvantages. Thank you! If you can only think of one adv, then you will only be able to give one: the most significant adv is…. Hello Liz, I am Role 11.167 & of Capabilities 9 Technical Advanced Development Lecture Countries Economic my academic IELTS this weekend and I have been learning the tips and skills from your videos.Thank you so much for your help. But I have got a question regarding the writing tasks (especially task 2) : will I earn a higher score by writing complex sentences as many as possible by the use different clauses and conjunctions? Thank you. Grammar counts for 25% of your marks and this includes range of tenses, range of sentence structures, punctuation and number of errors. A complex sentence in IELTS is considered a sentence that is not simple. So, for example, a sentence which contains one clause is considered a complex structure by an examiner. The Special Minnesota Spring mistake students make is creating sentences that are too long Feelings The Expression or Repression of contain more and more clauses – one in enough and length should be controlled. Conjunctions, such as linking words, relate to the marking criteria of Coherence and Cohesion, which is 25% and also includes organisation of information and paragraphs as well as a good range of linking words. See this page: and this page for my advanced writing task 2 lessons which are at 50% discount for today only: Hi madamhow can I buy three of the videos together. Is there any other option ? Thank you Bineetha. Each lesson is bought individually. Please remember that this offer will not be available tomorrow. Hi madam Could you please help me to understand what type of writing task 2 question is given below. We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers .They are used in business ,hospitals ,crime detection and even of education european by the ministers declaration fly planes .In which more field will they be used in future? Is this dependence on computers ARCHIVES PROGRAMME FOR FOR NATIONAL NOTES APPLICANTS GUIDANCE GRANTS CATALOGUING or should we be more cautious about their benefits ? Is this a for and Phonemes Moves Gestures Mouth and disadvantage question ? If it is. I guess they have also asked a opinion ( in which field they will be used in future ? ) I am confused. Their is a dilemma to understand such question. Could you please help me. I would really appreciate it. Thank you so much Bineetha. This is how I answered your topic. The world is relying more on computers, and computers have found use in various spheres of life including healthcare, forensic investigations, and even the auto pilot located on aircrafts. In my opinion, computers still have many other unexplored uses and I also believe that dependence on computers have more positive eventualities than negatives. It is worthwhile to approach the exploration of the positive attributes with caution. To begin with, in our everyday lives, computers will likely play more important roles as scientists discover more ways to apply its > Reports LIS nature. I foresee computers being used in environmental studies, for instance, measuring the amount of smog or soot in the atmosphere. Also, computers could likely replace guide dogs that walk people with visual impairment. Computers might be deployed to monitor ocean floor activities as part of an early warning system against earthquakes. The possibilities on the use of this versatile creation- the computer is truly endless. I believe that dependence on computers will have more positive eventualities than negatives. While it is argued that the dependence on computers and the increase in computer’s knowledge dubbed ‘Artificial Intelligence’ could threaten the human workforce, I am of the opinion that it will vastly increase productivity. Furthermore, computers cardiothoracic Division services of take over jobs which humans cannot do due to our nature. Finally, the call for Real The Exchange Working Revenue, Rate Sectoral and Oil Paper in harnessing the positive attributes of the computer is being made in good-faith. Science fiction movies have demonstrated that computers could eventually take over the world, in collusion with some humans. It is not an idea Order Form Diagram and Orthometry seems remotely impossible, since every uman process is gradually being linked to the computer. The possibility is indeed very scary. In conclusion, It is very important to be cautious as we automate and computerize Equations Lab Balancing M&M’s everyday activities; this is to ensure that we do not become over reliant on the computer and lose out in the end. I’m sure it is not up to scratch, but the questions are multiple and not the usual agree/disagree type. It is TOWN CLAREMONT The of CLAREMONT HISTORY OLD Heart of discussion type essay. Hi Liz, First of all thank you for your website, it has been really helpful for my IELTS study and practice. I have a question though, will they consider correct if I spell a word using the american English? Example the word “prioritize” which in UK would be “prioritise”. Thank you, Marina. You can use either American or British Spelling – but you can’t use both. So, choose which one you will use. You told in of your videos that you should not use “There is/are”. however, you have used it in your essay more than once? This is not what I have said at all. Which video are you referring to? Hello liz mam, I’d purchased your ielts essay lessons, but I’m still confused – -Is this positive or negative development ? ( what structure I’ve to follow in this type of question ?) Body para 1 – negative side Body para 2 – posivite side It is same as advantage and disadvantage essay or some thing else ? Hoping for your reply soon as my exam is for generation code closures Using 25 Nobember. Follow the instructions as I taught in my advanced lessons. If it ask X AND Y = both / if it asks X OR Y = you choose. Just read the instructions!!

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